Tuesday, 11 August 2015

Maui and the sun by caitlyn.

Long long a go there lived a boy named Maui he lived with his brothers in a village. The days were very short because the sun was very fast. Maui wanted to stop the sun and make it slower so maui and his brothers made ropes to get  the sun. When it was night time they caught the sun.Then the sun went slower so they could do more things.


  1. What a great retelling of Maui and the Sun. You have included the main parts of the story in the right order, so I knew what was happening! Miss Signal

  2. OMG Caitlyn,by Shauntell

  3. That is a great story Caitlyn.....well done..from Dad